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K.Lynn Grey's avatar

The dual perspective narration was jarring. Next time maybe tell the AI to change POV with each new chapter, not in the middle of a chapter. I'm a fan of head hopping if it's done right, but it's really easy to mess up. Or, you can ask the AI to use the omniscient POV so that you don't have to wait for chapter breaks.

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