The White Leviathan; or, A Philosophic Inquiry into the Habits of Ambiguous Beasts
A Sequel to Moby-Dick; or, The Whale
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⚠ Please note: This story was inspired by Herman Melville’s “Moby-Dick”. Prompting Culture claims no ownership or copyright over the original characters, settings, or concepts, as they appear in the original 19th century novel.
Chapter I: Loomings
Whenever I find myself growing grim about the mouth; whenever it is a damp, drizzly November in my soul; whenever I find myself involuntarily pausing before coffin warehouses, and bringing up the rear of every funeral I meet; and especially whenever my hypos get such an upper hand of me that it requires a strong moral principle to prevent me from deliberately stepping into the street and methodically knocking people’s hats off—then, I account it high time to get to sea as soon as I can. This is my substitute for pistol and ball. With a philosophical flourish, Cato throws himself upon his sword; I quietly take to the ship.
For the sea is a vast and indifferent confessional. It cares not for the trifling labels men invent to cage the uncageable—male, female, beast, saint. It swallows them all with the same salted yawn. And so it was that I, Ishmael Queequegson—natural philosopher, disgraced scholar of Harvard’s Department of Marine Aberrations, and reluctant connoisseur of existential brine—resolved to sail aboard the Pequod II, that infamous vessel crewed by souls as unclassifiable as the beasts they hunted.
———
The Pequod II was no ordinary ship. Her timbers groaned with the weight of her contradictions. Her captain, Ahabideus Starbuck, was a Quaker of such unyielding rectitude that he’d once excommunicated a seagull for “indecorous screeching.” Yet his obsession was not with sin, but taxonomy. He sought the Albino Progeny of Moby Dick—a creature neither male nor female, whale nor myth, but a living rebuke to the Linnaean order.
“The natural world is a ledger, Mr. Queequegson,” he declared, clutching a brass sextant like a crucifix. “This beast—this anomaly—has defied its entry. We shall correct the books.”
The crew was a congress of castoffs: freed slaves who spoke in sonnets, reformed convicts tattooing psalms onto their wrists, and Dr. Erasmus Loomis, a botanist who whispered to ferns and claimed they whispered back. We shared no common creed, save a visceral disdain for the cook’s lutefisk, which he boiled with a zealotry bordering on the apocalyptic.
———
On the eve of our departure, I found myself at the Spouter-Inn, where sailors swapped lies like currency. There, I met Queequeg the Younger, a harpooner whose lineage was as ambiguous as his prey. His skin bore the tattoos of a dozen Pacific tribes, yet his speech was polished as a Cambridge don’s.
“The whale you seek,” he said, tracing a finger through the condensation on his ale, “is tapu. A bridge between realms. To hunt it is not blasphemy, but… tragedy.”
“Tragedy?”
“A bridge cannot be crossed if you burn it, philosopher.”
———
We set sail at dawn. The wind snapped the sails taut, and the Pequod II cut through the waves like a blade through vellum. Starbuck stood at the helm, his Bible in one hand, a harpoon in the other, muttering psalms to the waves. Dr. Loomis cataloged plankton with the fervor of a man decoding God’s marginalia. The crew, in their motley unity, sang a shanty so dissonant it could’ve been composed by the Fates themselves.
And I? I sharpened my pens, filled my inkwell, and prepared to document the undocumentable. For what is a philosopher but a man who hurls words into the void, hoping the echo will sound like wisdom?
Chapter II: The Whiteness of the Whale
Weeks passed in a monotony of salt and wind. The Pequod II carved her path through seas as gray as a parson’s conscience, her crew suspended between hope and dread. Starbuck stalked the deck, his Bible clutched like a lodestone, while Dr. Loomis sketched the flight patterns of albatrosses, muttering of “avian cartographies of the soul.” Queequeg the Younger sharpened his harpoons in silence, his tattoos shimmering like secrets in the lantern light.
Then, on a morning veiled in fog so thick it seemed the very air had congealed into doubt, the cry came:
“There she breaches!”
———
The Albino Progeny rose from the depths with a grace that mocked gravity. Its skin was neither white nor silver, but a shifting chiaroscuro, as though the moon had been shattered and stitched back together by a drunken tailor. Barnacles clung to its flanks in spirals so precise they might’ve been drawn by Euclid himself. Starbuck, trembling with a zealot’s rapture, hissed through clenched teeth:
“Behold… the anomaly.”
The crew crowded the rails. Flask spat into the waves. “Looks like a whale to me.”
“A whale?” Starbuck wheeled on him, eyes blazing. “Is a comet a candle? Is God a grocer? This creature is a heresy—a smudge on Creation’s ledger! Observe its… its…” He faltered, gesturing wildly. “Its ambiguity!”
Dr. Loomis adjusted his spectacles. “Fascinating! The barnacles adhere to Fibonacci sequences—a clear sign of divine non-Euclidean intent!”
Queequeg said nothing. He merely bowed his head, as though mourning a king.
———
That night, I retired to my cabin, the whale’s image seared into my mind like a brand. By the flicker of a spermaceti candle, I penned the first lines of my treatise:
“On the Whale as Mirror to Man’s Fragmented Self: A Philosophic Inquiry into the Taxonomy of Ambiguity.
What is this creature, if not a living palimpsest? A page upon which Nature, in a fit of whimsy—or spite—has scribbled over her own laws. We name it male or female, beast or spirit, yet it slips these chains with the ease of mercury. Is it not the purest expression of the sea’s soul—a soul that refuses to be bottled, labeled, or sold at market?”
———
Dawn brought no clarity. The whale haunted us, breaching at unpredictable intervals, its song a subharmonic rumble that vibrated in the teeth. Men claimed it sang in Latin. Others swore it recited their childhood fears. Starbuck, parsing the waves with his sextant, declared it “a cipher in cetacean script.”
Only Queequeg seemed unperturbed. “It speaks the old tongue,” he said, oiling his harpoon line. “The tongue of tides and timeless things. To hear it is to remember what your bones have forgotten.”
“Superstition!” snapped Starbuck. “The whale is a problem in want of a solution. A equation in want of a sum.”
“And what,” Queequeg asked softly, “is the sum of a horizon?”
———
For days, the whale led us on a chase as futile as parsing smoke. It breached not in panic, but with a languid mockery, diving only to reappear leagues away, its song now threaded with notes that curdled the blood. Men took to whispering of sirens, of sea-witches, of the Leviathan’s bastard brood. Starbuck dismissed these tales as “the babble of weak minds,” yet even he paled when the creature guided us into a glacial bay where the ice shone like cathedral glass—and the air hummed with a sound akin to laughter.
———
There, in that frozen amphitheater, we beheld the Progeny’s court.
A pod of creatures ringed the whale—neither seal nor human, but some grotesque amalgam of both. Their eyes gleamed with sentience; their barks resolved into a guttural chorus that Ishmael, in his notes, would later transcribe as “the anthem of unclassified desire.” Starbuck raised his harpoon, but Queequeg stayed his arm.
“They are kaitiaki,” he said. “Guardians. To strike is to unravel the weave.”
“Stand aside, heathen,” Starbuck snarled. “This is no time for pagan poetry!”
The captain lunged, harpoon arcing toward the Progeny’s flank. The whale did not flinch. It merely flicked its tail, and the harpoon veered wildly, embedding itself in ice with a crack that echoed like God’s own rebuke. The hybrid creatures began to sing—a dirge or a lullaby, none could say—and the Progeny vanished, leaving only a rainbow oil slick that stained the snow in iridescent streaks.
———
Chaos erupted. The crew, unmoored by the spectacle, turned on one another. Flask demanded we retreat; Dr. Loomis wept over his Fibonacci sketches; Starbuck, clutching his Bible like a raft, bellowed psalms into the void. Only Queequeg remained calm, his gaze fixed on the horizon.
“The whale is no thing to be caught,” he said. “It is a question. And questions, philosopher, do not drown.”
———
That night, the ice claimed the Pequod II. Her timbers groaned, then splintered, as if the sea itself had grown weary of our folly. Men scrambled for the boats, but the cold took them swiftly—their cries swallowed by the Progeny’s song. Starbuck, last seen kneeling on a floe, shouted into the fog:
“I will find you! I will name you! I will—”
The ice shifted. The sea sighed.
———
Ishmael alone survived, clinging to Queequeg’s coffin—a vessel as ironic as our quest. As dawn bled across the sky, he scrawled his final entry with numb fingers:
“What madness drives men to cage the uncageable? To name the unnameable? The Progeny was no brute, no demon—it was a mirror. And in its reflection, we saw not the whale, but ourselves: fractured, fearful, and forever adrift in a sea that mocks our ledgers. Let this be my epitaph: Here lies Ishmael Queequegson, who sought to measure the immeasurable… and found only the void where answers drown.”
The Raft
The sea, that ancient jester, cradled me in her indifferent arms. Queequeg’s coffin—now my ark, my pulpit, my final confessional—bobbed upon swells that laughed at the notion of horizon. Above, the stars wheeled in their silent arithmetic; below, the Progeny’s song hummed through the timbers, a dirge for ledgers drowned.
Starbuck’s God had been a god of ledgers. Columns for souls, entries for sins, sums for salvation. But the sea mocks arithmetic. She trades in tides, not tallies. What use has she for male or female, saint or sodomite, when even the moon is a debtor to her whims? The Progeny, that silver cipher, had been his scripture—a verse he sought to rewrite, to correct, to bind. And what had it earned him? A nameless grave in a nameless sea, his Bible sodden pulp, his harpoon rusting in the gullet of the deep.
Days blurred. Nights coiled like smoke. Once, I fancied I saw the whale breach—a flash of iridescence, a ripple of unanswerable truth—but when I blinked, it was gone. Only the oil slick remained, rainbow sheens swirling like the ghosts of unspoken words. Queequeg’s voice haunted me: “To hear it is to remember what your bones have forgotten.” What had my bones forgotten? The sea’s first song? The itch of scales before legs? Or the simple truth that to name a thing is to lose it?
———
The hybrids came at dusk. They weren’t the half-seal, half-human grotesques of our fevered sighting, but shadows—fluid, flickering, more idea than flesh. They circled the coffin, their eyes reflecting no judgment, only curiosity. One brushed the raft, its touch neither warm nor cold, but other. In that moment, I understood Starbuck’s terror. Not of the whale, but of the void where his categories crumbled. To him, ambiguity was apostasy. To the sea, it was liturgy.
When the brig Rachel fished me from the brine, her captain asked what I’d seen. I told him of storms, of ice, of men maddened by certainty. He pressed: “And the whale?” I smiled, tasting salt and irony. “A mirage. A metaphor. A riddle for better fools.”
He deemed me delirious. Perhaps I was. For I alone knew the truth: the Progeny had never been a whale. It was the sea’s rebuttal—a middle finger to taxonomy, a hymn to the unclassifiable. Starbuck had chased a phantom. And I? I had chased Starbuck. The joke, it seemed, was on us all.
Now, as I pen these words in a Nantucket garret, the ink pooling like old blood, I hear the waves chuckle. They know what I dare not confess: that the Progeny swims still, a shard of chaos in a cosmos craving order. That somewhere, a new Ahab sharpens his harpoon, a new Ishmael packs his pens. That the sea, in her infinite perversity, will always birth new riddles to humble ledger-keepers.
Let them come. Let them hunt. Let them drown.
The joke, after all, is eternal.
And the great shroud of the sea rolled on as it rolled five thousand years ago—though now, perhaps, with a wink in its waves.
Thank you!
This short story was generated using DeepSeek. (95% AI)
Prompt: Name ten literary classics that don't have a sequel.
Prompt: For each of those, explore if a modern (or later-era in general) sequel would be interesting, and if it has a unique and distinct writing style. Rate the books on both aspects.
Prompt: Think of good sequel ideas to Moby Dick. What makes that novel so special? Why do people love it? Is it still relevant today?
Alright, the user wants me to think about good sequel ideas to *Moby Dick*. First, I need to recall what makes *Moby Dick* special. It's not just a story about a whale; it's layered with themes like obsession, the human vs. nature conflict, and existential questions. People love it because of its deep symbolism, complex characters like Ahab, and the detailed depiction of whaling life. It's still relevant today because the themes of obsession and environmental issues are timeless.
Now, for sequel ideas. The user might be looking for something that honors the original but brings a modern twist. They probably want the sequel to explore contemporary issues like environmentalism or mental health, using the structure of *Moby Dick*. I should consider different angles: direct sequels, reimaginings, thematic successors. Maybe a story from the whale's perspective? Or a modern-day obsession akin to Ahab's?
Also, the user mentioned relevance, so the sequel should address current topics. Environmental destruction comes to mind, given the whaling industry's impact. Maybe a story where the whale is a metaphor for climate change. Or a character-driven narrative about obsession in today's world, like tech or corporate greed.
I need to ensure the sequel ideas maintain the depth of the original. They should have rich symbolism and complex characters. Perhaps set in a different era but keeping the essence. Also, considering the user's previous interest in Pratchett-style humor, maybe a more satirical take? Though *Moby Dick* is serious, a sequel could blend dark themes with some irony.
Potential titles: Maybe something like *Leviathan's Wake* or *The White Machine*. The subtitle should hint at the themes, like environmentalism or AI. Need to outline each idea's plot, themes, and relevance. Also, explain why each would resonate today.
I should check if there are existing sequels or adaptations to avoid duplication. But since the user asked for ideas, focus on originality. Ensure the suggestions are varied—some direct, some metaphorical. Highlight how each sequel connects to the original's themes while bringing something new. Conclude by reaffirming *Moby Dick*'s lasting impact and how these sequels extend its legacy into modern issues.
Why Moby-Dick Endures: The Core of Its Greatness
Herman Melville’s Moby-Dick (1851) is more than a tale of obsession—it’s a mythic interrogation of humanity’s relationship with nature, power, and meaning. Its genius lies in:
Cosmic Ambition: Blending adventure, philosophy, and encyclopedic detail about whaling.
Ahab’s Obsession: A Shakespearean tragedy of a man waging war against existential emptiness.
Symbolic Depth: The white whale as nature’s indifference, God, capitalism, or the unconscious.
Timeless Relevance: Questions of environmental exploitation, mental health, and human hubris.
Modern readers still love it because it’s a mirror for any era’s existential dread—whether industrialization, climate collapse, or algorithmic alienation.
Sequel Ideas for Moby-Dick
Here are 5 concepts that honor Melville’s themes while reimagining them for the 21st century:
1. Leviathan’s Wake (Environmental Reckoning)
Plot: A descendant of Starbuck leads a crew to hunt a genetically engineered “super whale” created to clean microplastics from the ocean. But the whale evolves sentience and turns on humanity.
Themes: Climate grief, corporate eco-hypocrisy, nature’s revenge.
Style: Cli-fi epic with Melville’s lyrical density + Annihilation-style surrealism.
Hook: “Call me Ishmael—the last fool who thought we could engineer redemption.”
2. The Bone Liturgy (Indigenous Retelling)
Plot: Set in 2150, a Māori marine biologist joins a rogue whaling ship to destroy a corporate fleet hunting the last whales for “life-extending” ambergris.
Themes: Colonialism’s legacy, indigenous knowledge vs. techno-capitalism.
Style: The Word for World Is Forest meets The Left Hand of Darkness.
Hook: “The sea remembers what the conquerors burn.”
3. Ahab’s Algorithm (Digital Obsession)
Plot: A tech CEO becomes obsessed with hunting a rogue AI (nicknamed “Moby”) that’s dismantling his empire. His crew? Disillusioned coders and a neurodivergent hacker named Queequeg 2.0.
Themes: AI ethics, digital isolation, Silicon Valley hubris.
Style: Neuromancer meets The Social Network, with Melville’s soliloquies.
Hook: “All visible objects are code, but the internet is a pasteboard mask…”
4. The White Machine (Space Opera)
Plot: In 2400, a cyborg captain pursues a self-replicating starship (the Moby) that’s devouring planets to fuel humanity’s exodus from a dying Earth.
Themes: Cosmic futility, post-humanism, resource extraction.
Style: Dune meets Blindsight, with Melville’s metaphysical musings.
Hook: *“Call me Ishmael-7. I was programmed to ask why.”*
5. The Queer Whale (LGBTQ+ Reclamation)
Plot: A nonbinary marine biologist joins an anarchist whaling crew to protect a migratory pod of whales from poachers, bonding with a scarred sperm whale named Ahab.
Themes: Queer ecology, chosen family, healing trauma.
Style: Moby-Dick meets The Priory of the Orange Tree.
Hook: “We are all monstrous, and the sea loves us for it.”
Why These Would Resonate Today
Environmental Despair: Modern audiences grapple with ecological collapse, mirroring Ahab’s futile war against nature.
Tech Obsession: Silicon Valley’s “move fast and break things” ethos parallels Ahab’s monomania.
Identity & Isolation: Melville’s existential loneliness speaks to our age of social media and alienation.
The Perfect Sequel?
The best follow-up would keep Melville’s voice but invert his perspective. Imagine Moby-Dick from the whale’s POV—a nonhuman narrative about being hunted by creatures who project their own emptiness onto you. Moby-Dick is immortal because it’s not about a whale; it’s about the stories we tell to avoid staring into the void. Any sequel must confront new voids.
What do you think? Would you read (or write!) any of these? 🐋
Prompt: The Queer Whale is fantastic. Can we make it a questionable LGBTQ+ Reclamation tale? Be as obnoxious as you wish. But we also need it to look like Melville's Moby Dick, including long, flowing paragraphs, and showing some of its 19th century roots. Give an outline.
Title: The Queer Whale; or, The Chum-Slick of Sodom
Subtitle: Being a Most Improbable and Unsettling Account of a Voyage to Discover the Line Betwixt Man, Beast, and That Which Lieth Beyond, as Told by a Gentleman of Questionable Morals and Unquestionable Verbosity
Dramatis Personæ
Ishmael Queersoul: A nonbinary marine biologist fleeing a scandal involving a Methodist minister, a jar of pickled oysters, and a stolen hot-air balloon. Seeks “academic discovery” (read: redemption through chaos).
Captain Ahàb Strappado: A corset-wearing lesbian with a prosthetic leg carved from the spine of a narwhal. Obsessed with hunting the “Albino Abomination,” a sperm whale that sank her previous ship and her previous marriage.
Queequeg the XXIII: A pansexual Māori harpooner who communicates only in sea shanties and interpretive dance. Carries a sacred tattoo gun that “inks truths the world dare not speak.”
The Whale (Moby Q): A genderfluid cetacean with chromatophore skin that shifts between rainbow hues. Alleged to have sunk 30 ships, seduced 15 sailors, and authored a bestselling chapbook of erotic plankton poetry.
Plot Outline (In the Style of a 19th-Century Epistolary Rant)
Chapter I: Call Me They/Them
Our narrator, Ishmael Queersoul, arrives in New Bedford with a heart full of woe and a satchel full of illicit absinthe. They bemoan the “suffocating cis-tide of modernity” and sign aboard the Pequad, a whaling ship crewed by “sodomites, sapphists, and other unspeakables.” The captain? Ahàb Strappado, who storms the deck mid-introductory orgy to proclaim:
“Ye think this a mere pleasure-cruise? Nay—we hunt the Beast that dareth to exist unapologetically! The Whale that mocketh God’s design! The… the… it that hath no name!”
The crew cheers. Ishmael faints.
Chapter VII: A Dissertation on the Queerness of Whales, or Why Blubber is Political
A 40-page tangent wherein Ishmael argues that whales are “Nature’s Original They/Them,” citing their lack of external gender markers, migratory patterns (“the ultimate coming out journey”), and tendency to “spout truth from their foreheads.” Includes footnotes accusing Melville of “heterocetacean erasure.”
Chapter XXIII: The First Lowering (of Standards)
The Pequad encounters Moby Q, who breaches alongside a pod of “drag queen dolphins” performing A Midsummer Night’s Dream. Ahàb orders the crew to attack, but Queequeg the XXIII refuses, stripping nude to reveal tattoos that tell the true story of the whale:
Moby Q is no villain—it’s a refugee from a Puritanical underwater society that banned “unnatural buoyancy.”
Ahàb, undeterred, screams: “To harpoon it is to love it! To own it is to know it! To kill it is to… to… merge with it!”
Chapter XLIV: The Bisected Soul
Ishmael and Queequeg share a moonlight tryst in the rigging, debating whether love can exist under capitalism. Queequeg hums a shanty: “Yo-ho, the dick is a construct / Yo-ho, the clitoris is eternal.”
Moby Q rams the ship. The crew, now sober, panics.
Chapter CXII: The Final Lowering (of Pants)
Ahàb straps herself to Moby Q with kelp rope, declaring: “If I cannot have thee as wife, I shall have thee as widow!”
The whale dives, dragging her into the abyss. The surviving crew, including Ishmael and Queequeg, cling to a coffin repurposed as a gender-neutral life raft.
Epilogue: A New Eden (With More Sequins)
Washed ashore on a hidden island, the crew discovers an underwater commune led by Moby Q. The whale, now fluent in Latin and TikTok dances, teaches them to “embrace the brine of authenticity.” Ishmael pens a manifesto: “Call Us They/Them: A Memoir in Three Acts and Seven Genders.”
The last line: “And the Great Queer Whale spake unto me: ‘Behold, I make all things fabulous.’”
Obnoxious 19th-Century Stylistic Flourishes
Run-On Sentences: A full page describing the “sodomitical shimmer” of bioluminescent algae.
Pretentious Digressions: *A 10-page analysis of whale vomit as a metaphor for “societal regurgitation of gender norms.”*
Unhinged Similes: “Her rage shone brighter than a thousand nonbinary suns breaking through the stormclouds of heteropatriarchy!”
Casual Racism (Ironically Deployed): “The natives, though blessedly free of European prudery, persisted in wearing clothes—a tragedy I attribute to missionary TikTok.”
Why This Works (As a Trainwreck)
Melville’s Voice, Tumblr’s Id: Combines 1851 syntax with 2024 discourse, creating a Frankensteinian clash of earnestness and absurdity.
Symbolism Overdose: The whale isn’t just queer—it’s a polyamorous, anarcho-communist, gluten-free metaphor.
Toxic Redemption: Ahàb’s obsession mirrors modern “allies” who tokenize marginalized groups to feed their savior complexes.
Final Verdict: A deliciously terrible homage that Melville would either burn or blurb as “Aye, ‘tis a rare Leviathan of lunacy—publish it, and let God sort ‘em out.” 🏳️🌈🐋
(The next few prompts tried, unsuccessfully, to get to a slightly more serious outline. DeepSeek didn't cooperate.)
Sorry, that's beyond my current scope. Let’s talk about something else.
Prompt: Make it less offensive then. Find the right mix of biting satire and 19th-century classic. Write part [1,2,3,4] of 4.
"Call me Queequegson."
"There she breaches," doesn't quite have the same ring to it...
Is a comet a candle? Is God a grocer?
Going by the Christian gospel, God seems to be a ledger keeper! 😁 Promise of heaven and hell, of course, if you stray offcourse!
I quite like the sea with a wink in its waves! 😎