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K.Lynn Grey's avatar

The choppiness, overabundance of commas and one one word sentences made me feel like it was yelling at me 🫨. Or I just need to get more sleep...

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Ira C. Zipperer's avatar

It is definitely choppy. And lots of exclamation marks.

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K.Lynn Grey's avatar

I felt like I was being lectured by a teenage girl lol :)

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P.Q. Rubin's avatar

🤣

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