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K.Lynn Grey's avatar

A lot of words, but short on actual content. It seems that the AI thought that purple prose would convey emotion but all it did was bog the story down.

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P.Q. Rubin's avatar

Thanks. The 'emotional states' angle still needs some refinement, I guess.

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K.Lynn Grey's avatar

This is a case of "less is more." Think of Emily Dickinson. A lot of emotion created in a few simple lines.

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