This story was much better than the others. It was a little odd that each section ended with a conclusion statement, like the story was over. So, when the next chapter began it was a bit jarring. Usually, you would want to end a chapter with a "I wonder what's going to happen next," vibe. This is a small, nitpicking point. Also, Lucy wants her eyes back from the Proprietor :)
I see what you mean, for example, section 2 could do without the last sentence.
What bothered me was three consecutive parts ending with Maya taking a deep breath. Repetitiveness to me is a hallmark of bad AI writing. But maybe the AI is a better writer than me and it's a valid style choice? Maybe the proprietor actually is Lucy from that song? 😵💫
That wasn't what I was expecting, the story aside, because that's not what interested me most anymore, thanks for showing the process you took to get there. If you had left it without telling us it was AI I would have been happy.
If you told us it was AI but then not elaborated I might have felt cheated, but to get to see behind the curtain, as to the actual process involved, that was a little treat. I had no idea what actually goes into creating something like this.
I used ChatGPT mainly for searching for things and excel formulas so to see it used in a way that's so different is really interesting, it makes me wonder really what else it's capable of!
Thanks for joining the challenge in such a unique way!
This prompting sequence is very much a work in progress. It's meant to produce more human-looking text than your typical 'write a story' prompt. There's one more prompt for the illustrations and one for a title, but those still need some work.
This story was much better than the others. It was a little odd that each section ended with a conclusion statement, like the story was over. So, when the next chapter began it was a bit jarring. Usually, you would want to end a chapter with a "I wonder what's going to happen next," vibe. This is a small, nitpicking point. Also, Lucy wants her eyes back from the Proprietor :)
Thanks!
I see what you mean, for example, section 2 could do without the last sentence.
What bothered me was three consecutive parts ending with Maya taking a deep breath. Repetitiveness to me is a hallmark of bad AI writing. But maybe the AI is a better writer than me and it's a valid style choice? Maybe the proprietor actually is Lucy from that song? 😵💫
Too much breathing with make you pass out…So, tell your protagonists to breathe less…:)
That wasn't what I was expecting, the story aside, because that's not what interested me most anymore, thanks for showing the process you took to get there. If you had left it without telling us it was AI I would have been happy.
If you told us it was AI but then not elaborated I might have felt cheated, but to get to see behind the curtain, as to the actual process involved, that was a little treat. I had no idea what actually goes into creating something like this.
I used ChatGPT mainly for searching for things and excel formulas so to see it used in a way that's so different is really interesting, it makes me wonder really what else it's capable of!
Thanks for joining the challenge in such a unique way!
Glad you enjoyed!
This prompting sequence is very much a work in progress. It's meant to produce more human-looking text than your typical 'write a story' prompt. There's one more prompt for the illustrations and one for a title, but those still need some work.