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K.Lynn Grey's avatar

I think I detected more Seuss than Dahl. The factory polluted the rivers, created smog and harmed the wildlife (poor Barbaloots and Swomee Swans). The only thing missing was the Lorax.

Also, Dahl books tend to be meaner. Someone always gets a comeuppance. No one here was sucked into a chocolate river or eaten by giants.

What would happen if you put in the prompt to eliminate passive voice?

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