Fully agree. While I'm aware some writers like to use sensory language, this is one thing I have seen too often with AI. It's always "x smelled like y and z", with z being something smell-less, like an emotion. Usually it opens a paragraph, just to make it extra obnoxious.
I see what you mean. The mystery doesn't really lead anywhere. This may be because this particular AI is incapable of producing a coherent story. I'll give it a few more tries and then probably return to DeepSeek.
"The air smelled of turpentine and regret." Is it just me or does AI like to assign smells to emotions? It always throws me for a loop.
Fully agree. While I'm aware some writers like to use sensory language, this is one thing I have seen too often with AI. It's always "x smelled like y and z", with z being something smell-less, like an emotion. Usually it opens a paragraph, just to make it extra obnoxious.
To my mind, the story is an attempt to be all mystical yet mysterious.
No conclusion, just an appeal to listen. 😎
Thanks!
I see what you mean. The mystery doesn't really lead anywhere. This may be because this particular AI is incapable of producing a coherent story. I'll give it a few more tries and then probably return to DeepSeek.