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K.Lynn Grey's avatar

Now that, was an eggcellent ending...

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K.Lynn Grey's avatar

Hey, I liked everything but the last line. A bad last line can taint the whole story. But otherwise, impressive.

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P.Q. Rubin's avatar

What last line? 😉

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K.Lynn Grey's avatar

"You live, my darling. With all the pain and all the joy. It's what makes you who you are."🤢

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P.Q. Rubin's avatar

Oh no, I made it worse! 🗑

edit: never mind, turns out AI knows all about good last lines.

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K.Lynn Grey's avatar

Oops…If all else fails, borrow a last line from Vonnegut, “Welcome to the monkey house.”

Should work every time.

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